Dear friends,
It is i Julius Caesar and i have grave news that i am dead. I was betrayed by my friends and am going to give you advice about friendship. One is to always have trust in your friends because you never know what will happen with your fate. The second is to always never be to close to someone because they could betray you.
Brutus my dearest friend thought that trust is a huge part in a friendship and that being trustworthy is a great deal. I disagree because to have friends or a relationship you must have trust and that is what i did but got betrayed by my dearest friend Brutus i was so sad by this i said (“et tu Brute?”II 77). Trust your dearest friends because they can always help you in the time of need. If you need advise of wisdom friends can always help. So remember that trust is a powerful weapon.
My second word of advice to you dear friends is never get to close to someone personally or they could betray you. If there is a very good friend or someone you like you can care for them and love them but never put you full heart into them because they could betray you. me dear Anthony was very loyal to me and at my funeral said “Brutus was an honorable man III pg 88) I disagree with him because he is not an honorable man i was close to him and loved him but got betrayed.
So my dearest people please consider your friendships and be safe.
your forever loving leader,
Julius Caesar
It is i Julius Caesar and i have grave news that i am dead. I was betrayed by my friends and am going to give you advice about friendship. One is to always have trust in your friends because you never know what will happen with your fate. The second is to always never be to close to someone because they could betray you.
Brutus my dearest friend thought that trust is a huge part in a friendship and that being trustworthy is a great deal. I disagree because to have friends or a relationship you must have trust and that is what i did but got betrayed by my dearest friend Brutus i was so sad by this i said (“et tu Brute?”II 77). Trust your dearest friends because they can always help you in the time of need. If you need advise of wisdom friends can always help. So remember that trust is a powerful weapon.
My second word of advice to you dear friends is never get to close to someone personally or they could betray you. If there is a very good friend or someone you like you can care for them and love them but never put you full heart into them because they could betray you. me dear Anthony was very loyal to me and at my funeral said “Brutus was an honorable man III pg 88) I disagree with him because he is not an honorable man i was close to him and loved him but got betrayed.
So my dearest people please consider your friendships and be safe.
your forever loving leader,
Julius Caesar
Interesting! I think this could be a little longer and The thesis could be in one Sentence and could be better structured but otherwise it was pretty good. Eactly what is your thesis?
ReplyDeleteYou had a professional introduction with a few common errors. I think you should improve on your grammar. On scale to one to ten, how much effort did you put in to this? 1 being lowest and ten being the highest.
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